Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices, but I feel like the woman of the couple could have sounded a bit more...Feminine. xD Other than that, great job! Good luck!
Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices, but I feel like the woman of the couple could have sounded a bit more...Feminine. xD Other than that, great job! Good luck!
Ha, thanks... Tried to channel some Dr. Girlfriend for Mrs Smith... Hearing her voice in Venture Bros cracks me up every time...
Nice job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices, and the music was actually pretty good and fitting, But it could be leveled out a bit, because it kinda drowns the voices out a bit.
I've been getting a bit of that lately. I'll have to be careful with the music later on.
Nice job, fellow entrant. I'm not sure if this followed the theme, though. The theme was "My FIrst..." and I didn't hear what the first was. There's a lot of mic static and puffing, but that can be fixed with buffing up your recording area. And you need to level out the volume on each of the voices, because there is a fair bit of mic topping in this. Other than that, nice job. Good luck!
my first death by zombie that isn't a zombie but only looks like a zombie
Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the plot and the voices, but the audio quality could have been a bit better. Depending on what recording software you use, you could put filters on it to make it sound a bit fuller. Also, there were mic puffs that I heard toward the end. That can be easily fixed with a pop filter or a thin layer of thin fabric placed in front of the mic to absorb the puffs on the p's, b's and such. Good job, and good luck!
Thanks for the Review! I'll add some compression to the vocal track of the people who receive calls to try to give it that fuller sound. I'm using a mic screen as well as a wind screen on the mic itself, I just need to work on my plosives ;). Again thanks for the critique!
Great job, fellow entrant! I'd add sound effects (from freesound, or other places that offer copyright-free sound effects) because right now it just sounds kinda stale with just voices. I like the plot, with the characters interacting with the narrator, but I always like plots like that. xD I'd try to find something to make your voice sound a bit...fuller. Right now, it sounds a bit like it was recorded in a box, and the sound is very hollow and kind of has a dull echo. Other than that, this was nice! Good luck!
Thank you. I may look into the sound effects this weekend. However, I don't know what to do about the recording quality. I don't really know what else I could have done better. This is as good as it gets I guess.
Great job, fellow entrant! I liked the voices and the plot, which is different from a lot of the entries. The mixing should be fixed up a bit, though. It's still kinda quiet, and the mixing of the sound effects volume compared to the voices volume could do to be a bit better. Still, great job! Good luck!
Bollocks, I guess it wasnt loud enough! Hahah, back to the drawing room, and thank you for the feedback!
Nice job, fellow entrant! I think the voices were nice, but the most outstanding problem is the quality for me. It sounds very muffled, and the delivery sounds a bit forced. Other than that, it was actually pretty good!
yea, did it in one take. really kinda tried to tweak it to make it sit together right. But I don't have high end equiptment so I'm only using an Earforce X11 by turtle beach to do it. Thanks for the review though!
Nice job, fellow entrant! I really liked your voices, and the range you displayed. The script and sound effects were very natural and clean. Great work!
Thank you sir!
Wow, this was really well done! I'm actually kind of worried now. xD The voices were fantastic, and I think you have a great chance of winning. Let's hope I have the same. xD Go0od luck in the contest!
Hey thanks! :D Haha. Don't worry, I think you have a good chance in the contest :3
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